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How to Introduce a Character (Without Saying a Word)

  • Writer: Lorraine Flett
    Lorraine Flett
  • Jul 28
  • 3 min read

There’s something magical about the first moment we meet a character on screen. Maybe it’s the flicker of movement in the corner of the frame. Maybe it’s a silhouette bathed in the last light of day. Or maybe it’s the thunderclap of dialogue that makes us sit up and say, “Who is that?”


But here’s the secret we've found. After hours of script-reading, rewatching old favorites, and cross-referencing every screenwriting book that ever made us scribble in the margins, the best character introductions don’t start with dialogue. They start with a feeling. A hunch. A whisper from the story that says, this person matters.


So today, we're breaking down how to introduce characters in a screenplay in a way that feels visual, vital, and most of all, intentional.


Let Visuals Tell the Story First

The screen loves silence. It craves visual information. In fact, some of the most unforgettable character intros say nothing at all.


Think of Darth Vader’s entrance. Pure silhouette. Cape billowing. Breath hissing. No backstory required. We feel who he is before we ever know his name. Or Holly Golightly in Breakfast at Tiffany’s, standing in front of a glowing Fifth Avenue window in the early morning hush. We don’t need to hear her speak to understand she’s longing for something more.


When we write character intros, we try to imagine: If the volume was turned down completely, would we understand who this person is? If we wouldn’t, we haven’t gone deep enough into their physical world.


Reveal Character Through Action

The first thing your character does is often more revealing than anything they say. You can write pages of clever dialogue, but if they enter the story passively, just reacting or following someone else’s lead, we’re already a step behind.


If your character is brave, show them doing something risky. If they’re selfish, maybe they cut in line at a coffee shop. If they’re brokenhearted, maybe they rip a wedding invitation in two before tossing it into the sea.


There’s a screenwriting phrase we love: You are what you do. And that couldn’t be truer in introductions.


Demonstrate the Character's Fatal Flaw Early

This one gets missed a lot, and we understand why. When we love our characters, it’s tempting to show them in the best light first. To ask the audience to like them. But flaws are what make people compelling.


Take Birdman. Riggan Thomson’s first real moment is levitating in his dressing room, half-naked and muttering to himself. It’s absurd and strangely tender, but it also immediately introduces his inner contradiction: ego versus insecurity, reality versus fantasy. The entire film spirals out from that moment.


A character’s flaw is often what shapes their arc. Plant it early and the audience subconsciously starts tracking it. That’s where emotional payoff lives.


Present Characters in Striking or Relatable Situations

Start bold. Or start small. Just don’t start boring.


When Walter White stumbles out of his Winnebago in nothing but tighty-whities and a gas mask, we don’t just remember it because it’s bizarre. It’s because it poses a question. What the hell is happening here?


On the flip side, placing a character in an everyday struggle can immediately create empathy. Maybe they’re juggling three kids and a call from a debt collector. Maybe they’re fumbling through an awkward job interview. Striking doesn’t always mean strange. It means loaded with meaning.


Create a Hook That Leaves Audiences Wanting More

Finally, leave us curious.


A trick we love, and one that Tarantino uses like a charm, is letting other characters introduce your protagonist before we even meet them. In Pulp Fiction, we hear about Mia Wallace long before she sashays into frame. By the time we see her, she’s already legendary.


You don’t always need mystery. But you do need intrigue. Ask yourself: What unanswered question does the audience have about this character after their first moment? If there’s no mystery, there may be no momentum.


Writing great character introductions starts with observation. Not just on the page, but in the real world. How people enter a room. How they carry stress in their shoulders. The way they make or avoid eye contact. All of that shapes the way we bring characters to life.

That’s why, in our screenwriting intensives, we include experiential exercises that train you to notice these details. The better your eye for behavior, the more specific and grounded your characters will feel.


It’s not about clever tricks. It’s about the kind of attention that sees the difference between someone reaching for a glass out of habit versus someone doing it to delay a hard conversation.


That’s where introductions live, not just in the scene, but in the moment behind the moment.


What goes the following photograph reveal? Can you build a world, develop a story from this image?

Photo Credit: Lorraine Flett
Photo Credit: Lorraine Flett

 
 
 

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